REVIVE

you lost the battle
when you were strong
and you were sleepless
when the night was long
but it will be over
and it will be right
out of the window
it will be bright
and there’s a right
for every wrong
and a rhythm
for every song
so sing
while you are alive
hey wounded soldier
REVIVE

14 comments

  1. bianca-a-torres · April 30, 2010

    hi . awesome poetry , why dont you get them published???

    • Gurpreet · April 30, 2010

      sure i will bianca , thanks for liking ..

  2. sudheera · April 30, 2010

    hey it reminded me the mighty karna( of mahabarath) ……

    i wonder wen this raising poet will publish his poems…….

    • Gurpreet · April 30, 2010

      lol , i wonder how many copies will be sold , its better to be unknown writer than to be flop writer ,,,lol

      • sudheera · April 30, 2010

        i wonder y this writer cant understand???
        well i saw rly bad writers bcmg writers ….

        i wonder wen this writer cme 2 knw of his talent lol…

  3. Gurpreet · April 30, 2010

    i wonder i should take your advice seriously ,,,lol

    • sudheera · May 1, 2010

      i wonder u must!!!!!!

  4. prateeksikka · May 19, 2010

    There is no harm trying veere.

  5. Dhruv Mahasha · May 19, 2010

    very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!good work!!!!

    • Gurpreet · May 19, 2010

      thanks dhruv ..

  6. JollyPrincess · May 26, 2010

    Beautiful poem of courage. 🙂

  7. Ioana Zbantz · June 2, 2010

    Hey I’m Ioana Zbantz from Romania. You used the eyes part of my “Jazz” drawing without letting me know first????

  8. sonali · July 17, 2010

    hi ,
    splendid ,awesome poetry.

    • Gurpreet · July 18, 2010

      hi sonali . thanks a lot for appreciating .means a lot to me !! 🙂

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