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(image by Mark Cappittella)

i dream about a dream
of dreaming a dream
in which
she would be dreaming
of dreaming me
in her dreams

its a fact
that when ever i try to think
of not thinking
that i want to think about it
i end up thinking
about the same thing
that i don’t want to think
as if i am MAD

i know that i know
that its important to know
that she knows
what i want to know
about her
and she will not let me know
the things that shes knows
what i want to know

i want her
to want me
to want her
but she does not want me
to want her
to want me

i love to
love her love
for love of life
in which she would love
to live a life
to love her love

i remember
how she remembered me
remembring her remember
the beautifull things
in her remembrance

i write about writing
about the things
that i can not write

ahhh,it will never make sense

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13 comments

  1. Rupak Banerjee · August 21, 2009

    This is good stuff. Try to get a publication of collection of your poetry. This should be the first one. It’ll be a best seller. Awesome writing man.

  2. jassy · October 13, 2009

    nice bro!!

  3. vikram singh · November 12, 2009

    22 ne fatte chakke hoye ne.. buruaaa

  4. Gurpreet · December 27, 2009

    thanx bai thanx

  5. wolverine · January 8, 2010

    nice piece of poetry.

  6. LB · January 19, 2010

    It would be classy of you to attribute the puzzle image to it’s creator. His name is Mark Cappittella, and his website – where you got the image – is mgcpuzzles.com.

    • Gurpreet · January 20, 2010

      i dint knew about the image,,,it is a brilliant image ,my blog is a poetry blog,,and it compliments my poem a lot…

  7. Cocobutterfly · January 22, 2010

    This is a beautiful piece of writing.

    • Gurpreet · January 22, 2010

      thanks a lot..means a lot to me..

  8. Nabiilah · March 24, 2010

    Hmmm…great!!!!Talking about dream dream and dream…..Lovely!!!!

  9. Michele · March 25, 2010

    would you mind terribly if I used your beautiful poem in a thank you card to send to our lovely friends and family after my mothers funeral. It is so appropriate.

    • Gurpreet · March 25, 2010

      hey please use it ..i am fine with it !!

      • M · March 25, 2010

        Thamk you, it’s perfect.

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