REVIVE
by Gurpreet
you lost the battle
when you were strong
and you were sleepless
when the night was long
but it will be over
and it will be right
out of the window
it will be bright
and there’s a right
for every wrong
and a rhythm
for every song
so sing
while you are alive
hey wounded soldier
REVIVE
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hi . awesome poetry , why dont you get them published???
sure i will bianca , thanks for liking ..
hey it reminded me the mighty karna( of mahabarath) ……
i wonder wen this raising poet will publish his poems…….
lol , i wonder how many copies will be sold , its better to be unknown writer than to be flop writer ,,,lol
i wonder y this writer cant understand???
well i saw rly bad writers bcmg writers ….
i wonder wen this writer cme 2 knw of his talent lol…
i wonder i should take your advice seriously ,,,lol
i wonder u must!!!!!!
There is no harm trying veere.
very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!good work!!!!
thanks dhruv ..
Beautiful poem of courage.
Hey I’m Ioana Zbantz from Romania. You used the eyes part of my “Jazz” drawing without letting me know first????
hi ,
splendid ,awesome poetry.
hi sonali . thanks a lot for appreciating .means a lot to me !!